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09 Journal September 2014



september 26,2014                                     TODAY                                                                    rahma


           
                           Today i went swimming with my team (sting rays) and im in  d group and today i did dry land it was panfull but fun. My friend Allie pick  me up and i droped her off . When we were on our way to drop me off from swimming Allie told me and someone named roben a story and it was in an asralean aksent.
                                                                THE GECO

So I was in my htell room and i was just about to go to bed and i ternd of the lights and i herd little feet walking on the selling so i got out of bed and ternd on the lights and there was a geco on the selling and it froz so i terned off the lights and i little feet again and i terned the lights on and off on off on off on and it was still on the selling so i called room serveies and i  said that there was a geco on the selling and she said ''ya mait dases a geco'' in a astralean aksent,and hung up. Then i said thats rood.
                                                                     THE END



SO IM A GECO YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT!?!?!?!?!?



septemder 29                                  TODAY                                         rahma


this is a male criket    
you can tell from its wings and it has no stinger like the female
when  you raise crikets all the males will be on the egg cartons
because he doesnt wont mate with the females any more


                                                                  feamale laying eggs

this is a female criket
you can tell from its stinger ( a stinger is  the long thing coming from its abdoman and thats
what they put in th dert to lay eggs)



September 30, 2014


I plan to add sound and narration to this.

Comments

  1. This is a fun way to do a journal. I'd like you to choose one section of this that we can work on together for spelling, grammar and punctuation. It can be the Sept. 26 journal entry, your gecko story or the captions for the crickets. We will copy it into a Google document and refine it together over the phone or Skype.

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  2. I also really like your claymation video. Very cute. Have you ever thought about creating a video like for a story you've read?

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  3. no i havent though about that but i might do it soon when im finished reading on of my books

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  4. Hi Rahma, what portion of this can we edit together?

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